For Khamisa & the crew · The Prana Lounge

Production 2 Shot List

Shoot 2 is five ads, sixteen instructor questions and as many member interviews as we can get. Remakes, POV resets and showcases are all done or covered. Every ad carries two endings so one take serves both a soft campaign and a click campaign.

Left To Shoot

Tue Aug 25, 10:30am · 21 items left · day 1 shot Aug 18

Production 2, Shoot 2 · Tue Aug 25

Left To Shoot

Remakes, POV resets and showcases are all done or covered by existing footage. What is left is 21 items plus 5 member interviews, which frees most of the afternoon.

Cut for good: remakes, POV resets 63–68, showcases 69–70. Reel 38 only if the room happens to go quiet, it needs the controlled setup.

Tue Aug 25 · 10:30am

Run of Day

10:30

Setup + D2 stills

Lighting rig, lock the talking-head mark. Stills while she is fresh.

11:00

Ads 01, 02, 04, 05

Khamisa to camera. One look, one mark. Three endings on each: soft, button, and one that says the ten dollars out loud. Confirm the price with Khamisa before rolling. No price spoken.

12:30

Member interviews, five people

Rolling. Grab people as classes change over and keep going all afternoon.

As many members as will sit down. Releases signed first.

1:45

Instructor questions I01–I16

One question, one video. Batch by person, not by question order.

Maya or Ally, plus a Pilates instructor for the Pilates question.

3:15

Ad 03 walk-in, then more of whatever is working

The walk-in needs one member followed through a full class. After that the day is open, so go back to members and instructors. More testimonials is never the wrong answer.

If it slips: protect 11:00, then the interviews. Everything else can wait.

Added Aug 24 · 16 new ads

New Ad Block: Selling the Package, Not the Subscription

These come out of a full rebuild of how the offer is sequenced. The short version: every offer we currently advertise is a subscription, and a subscription is the wrong thing to sell a stranger. These sixteen ads sell a first class instead, and move the money to the 12-Week Reset, closed in person.

Why the whole block exists

A new member costs roughly $150–$200 to acquire and pays $38.88 a week. That money comes back in five to six weeks, which is exactly why the budget cannot go up. The fix is not better ads. It is collecting most of the money on day one.

New order of operations: a paid first class gets them in the door → the instructor closes the 12-Week Reset ($399 PIF) right after that class → they roll onto $155.52 per 4 weeks at week 13. Ads only ever sell step one. The studio sells step two, in person, before the person leaves the building.

What that changes about the creative: lead with the result and a fixed timeframe, never with access or price. One CTA per ad. And proof carries more weight than any hook, which is why the member and instructor questions are the priority tomorrow. Three finished testimonials already exist from Production 1 (B0 below) and they are strong, but three is a thin rotation.

Two conflicts to settle before any of this publishes

1. This needs a paid intro class, and Khamisa retired the $10 on Aug 14. The model still needs a paid, low-friction front door, and the Morning Membership is a subscription, so it cannot do that job. Either the $10 intro comes back purely as the front door, or we price a single paid first class. Block A is written to work either way, and no script says a number out loud.

2. The paid offer is the 12-Week Reset, NOT 40 Soft. $399 paid in full: unlimited classes for 12 weeks, a first-week plan, orientation, check-ins at weeks 2, 6 and 10, one guest pass, one member event. Rolls to $155.52 per 4 weeks after, which is the existing $38.88/wk. Downsell is three payments of $149 — payment terms, never price. At a $175 CAC the required same-day close rate is ($175-$10)/$389 ≈ 42%, so the in-person conversation is the whole ballgame. The 40 Soft is Khamisa's free community challenge, not a product — it is the reason to start before Sep 15, and C2 is the only ad that points at it.

A1First class · "The habit, not the poses"
TOFAug 25
Hook

“The hardest part of yoga isn't the poses. It's showing up twice in the same week.”

Agitate

“You buy the pass in January. You go three times. Then February happens, and the pass just sits there reminding you about it every time you open your email.”

Transformation

“So we don't sell you a pass and wish you luck. You book one class, at a real time, and someone knows your name when you walk in.”

Proof

“880 square feet, 28 infrared panels, fourth floor of the Post Building. Yoga, Pilates, breathwork, mobility. Two blocks from your office.”

Ending · TOF

“The Prana Lounge. Fourth floor of the Post Building, two blocks from your office.”
Ending 2, click: “Tap below to book your first class.” Ending 3, with price: “Your first class is ten dollars. Tap below.”

The lead hook for the whole block. Khamisa to camera, warm studio light. Price stays out of the audio and goes on as a text overlay, same rule as the M block.
A2First class · "Unlimited is useless without a plan"
MOFAug 25
Hook

“Unlimited classes are useless if nobody tells you which ones to take.”

Agitate

“That's every studio in this city. Here's forty classes a week, good luck. So you take the same one every time, get bored in a month, and stop going.”

Transformation

“When you come in for your first class we ask you two questions and hand you a week. Which three classes, which days, which instructor.”

Proof

“You don't have to figure out where you fit. That part is our job.”

Ending · TOF

“The Prana Lounge. Fourth floor of the Post Building, two blocks from your office.”
Ending 2, click: “Tap below to book your first class.” Ending 3, with price: “Your first class is ten dollars. Tap below.”

Second of the three lead hooks. This one is also a promise the studio has to keep, so it only ships once the front desk is actually handing people a first week.
A4First class · The walk-in, no talking head
TOFAug 25
Visuals

Single continuous-feeling cut: street outside the Post Building, elevator, fourth floor, shoes off, front desk greets her by name, mat down at the back, room fills, class runs, she walks out onto Homer with wet hair.

Text beats

“You've never done this before.” / “Nobody is looking at you.” / “Someone learns your name in the first thirty seconds.” / “Back row is fine. Back row is normal.” / “Fifty minutes later." / "Now you have.” / End card: “Book your first class.”

No script, no audio beyond room tone and music. This kills the biggest objection cold traffic has, which is not price, it is walking into a room full of people who already know what they are doing. Needs one member willing to be followed for a full class on the 25th.
B0Already in the can · three member testimonials from P1
Use now
Reel 33 · Yoga + Pilates member, years of practice

This is the one. She came in low, left better. Music, smell, lighting. Then she says the whole thesis of the new model out loud, unprompted: “try the intro week and take as many classes as you can. Everyone finds their favourite instructor and their favourite class type. You need enough time to figure out which ones are yours.”

That is a paying member arguing for a multi-week package, in her own words, better than any script we would write. Cut it to 30 seconds and it becomes the proof beat inside C1 and the standalone control for the twelve weeks.

Open the reel · transcript

Reel 31 · Yoga member, back injury

Signed up on a whim after work, took Strength and Stretch, called it wholesome. She has a back injury and has learned to be careful with anything high intensity, and this class felt different. Ends on the on-the-fence line: “you gotta do it. You feel happy that you did it.”

Use it behind the first-class ads. It answers “my body can't do this,” which is the real objection under A5.

Open the reel · transcript

Reel 32 · Pilates member, midday class

Almost skipped it to run errands, went anyway, got everything done afterwards. Came in tight, left relaxed enough to be productive. “A midday stretch sounds like a luxury until you realise how much better the rest of your day goes because of it.” Also kills the heat objection: not too hot, not dripping.

This is the Morning Membership ad. It answers “I don't have time” with a member saying the time came back.

Open the reel · transcript

Watch the captions, not the footage. Reel 31's original post description ends on “your first class starts at $10” and Reel 35 and 36 carry the retired $10 and $38.88 offers. The spoken audio in all three is offer-free, so the footage recuts cleanly. Rewrite the caption and end card, never re-edit the interview. Raw masters for all three are in 5. Raw Files → P1 → S1.
C112-Week · Pay once, bring someone
BOFAug 25Khamisa to OK the price
Hook

“Every challenge you've quit, you could quit for free.”

Why

“Nothing happened when you stopped. Nobody called. Nobody noticed. That's why stopping was so easy.”

Fix one, the money

“So this one is twelve weeks and you pay for it on day one, before you've done a single class. There's nothing left to decide.”

Fix two, the person

“And it comes with a guest pass. Bring whoever is most likely to drag you out of bed on a Tuesday. You're very good at letting yourself down in private. You're much worse at cancelling on a friend who's already in the car.”

Endings

Say nothing. Stop after the guest pass line and hold a beat, the button carries it. Ending 2, click: “Tap below to book your first class.” Ending 3, with price: “Your first class is ten dollars. Tap below.”

Merged from the old C1 and C3, which were making the same argument. The money and the guest pass are now the two answers to one problem: nobody noticing when you stop.
C212-Week · "Start before September 15"
Aug 25BOF
Hook

“If you're going to start, start before September 15th.”

What 40 Soft is

“That's the day 40 Soft kicks off. It's the opposite of 75 Hard. No two-a-days, no ice baths, no guilt when you miss a morning. It's free, you come as often or as little as you want, and the whole studio does it together.”

The deadline

“Come in before the 15th and you start with everybody else. Come in after and you're starting on your own.”

Ending · BOF

“The list closes on the 14th.” Ending 2, click: “The list closes on the 14th. Tap below to book your first class.” Ending 3, with price: “The list closes on the 14th. Your first class is ten dollars. Tap below.”

The name is the joke, so it has to be said against 75 Hard or it lands as nothing. Say “it's free” in the same breath so nobody thinks it is a second thing to buy. This ad does not mention the twelve weeks — C1 sells that, this one only creates the deadline.
D1Static · Testimonial quote card ×3
Edit only
Build

Pull the three strongest lines out of the B1 and B3 footage. Member's face in warm studio light behind it, their line set large across the frame, first name and how long they've been coming underneath.

Caption

Full story in the caption. Ending depends on where it runs: organic keeps the bio link, paid BOF ends on “DM us SOFT.”

Zero shoot cost, built from block B. Statics tend to outrun video on retargeting because the person has already watched the video.
D2Static · Face and offer, deadline version
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Image

Khamisa, warm light, relaxed, facing camera. Big text: “12 weeks. Paid once.” Small text: “Start before Sep 15.”

Caption

“Every challenge you've quit, you could quit for free. This one you pay for on day one, and then there's nothing left to decide. Twelve weeks of unlimited classes, a plan for your first week, check-ins at weeks two, six and ten, and a guest pass. Start before September 15 and your first forty days run alongside our free 40 Soft. Book your first class.”

Same still session as S5, so shoot both looks in one go on the 25th.
D3Ugly ad · The prepaid maths
Edit only
Build

Plain class B-roll, no music swell, text straight on top. “Twelve weeks of classes.” / “Paid once, on day one.” / “Nothing left to cancel.” / End card: “Book your first class.”

Cut from footage we already own. Ugly ads keep beating polished ones in this account, so it goes in every test.
D4Ugly ad · First class, over the walk-in
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Build

The A4 walk-in footage, stripped back. Text: “First time is the hard part.” / “We do it with you.” / End card: “Book your first class.”

Same source as A4, cut short and dumb on purpose. Runs as the cold-traffic control against A1.

The half nobody films

None of these sixteen ads matter if the conversation after class doesn't happen. The ad's only job is to get a person onto a mat at a specific time. The prepaid close happens in person, before they leave the building, and the studio's team runs it.

That process is written up in plain English for Khamisa and her staff here: prana-team-guide.pages.dev

12:30 onward · the number to hit is people, not questions

Member Interviews

The nine questions below are one script we ask every member. They are not nine reels. The reels come from how many people sit down, so the only number that matters on the day is how many members we get through.

5
Members. That is the target
+
Anything past five is bonus
5 min
Each. Three or four questions per person

What five people actually produce

Roughly one usable reel per person, so five interviews is about five proof reels, plus a rapid-fire cut built from a single sentence out of each and a couple of static quote cards. Three finished testimonials already exist from Production 1, so five more doubles the rotation. If more people are willing on the day, keep going, but five is the number that makes the day a success.

The nine questions, same for everyone

M01

What made you come in the first time?

M02

How long have you been coming now?

M03

What's a normal week look like for you here?

M04

What's your favourite class, and why that one?

M05

Anything surprise you about it?

M06

How do you feel walking out compared to walking in?

M07

Has anything changed for you since you started coming?

M08

How would you describe this place to a friend?

M09

What would you say to someone who's been thinking about coming in?

For whoever is asking

Three or four of these per person is plenty, you do not need all nine. Never feed them the answer. If they say "it's great," ask what makes it great and wait.

Don't chase a transformation story. Some people just like the room, and that is a perfectly good ad.

At the end, get them to say their first name and how long they have been coming. We put that on screen under their face.

I01 to I16 · one question, one video

Instructor Questions

Sixteen questions, sixteen reels, one setup. Ask it off camera, let them answer in their own words and demo whatever they reach for. Batch by person, not by number. If an instructor only has time for six, take the first six.

The corrections

I01

Someone comes in with tight shoulders. What do you actually tell them?reel 49

I02

Do you have to be flexible before you start yoga?reel 50

I03

Does sweating more mean it's working?reel 51

I04

Should you stretch before a workout, or after?reel 52

I05

Is Pilates the easy option?reel 53

I06

If you're not sore the next day, did it count?reel 54

I07

Do you need cardio to change your body?reel 55

I08

Someone trains for an hour and then sits for nine. What does that actually do?reel 56

The person

I09

Why do you teach?reel 57

I10

What changes for someone between their first week and their sixth?reel 58

I11

What do new people get wrong in their first week?reel 59

I12

What's a moment in class that stuck with you?reel 60

I13

What would you say to someone standing outside who hasn't come in yet?reel 61

I14

What's your favourite class to teach, and why?reel 62

I15

What do people not realise about the heat?

I16

What's one thing you wish everyone knew before their first class?

How to run it

Same framing and same spot for everyone so the set cuts together.

Have them restate the question inside the answer so the clip stands alone. "Do you have to be flexible" becomes "You don't have to be flexible before you start."

Two takes each, maximum. The first one is usually the honest one.

Quick Reference

All 37 Reels, At a Glance

Jump to any reel below. Concepts and shot direction are in the sections underneath — full teleprompter scripts follow in the shoot doc once concepts are locked on the Aug 14 call.

#TitleFormatDay
37The snooze spiralCloningShot Aug 18
38The third coffeeCloningAug 25
39Lunch at the deskCloningShot Aug 18
40The back crack fixCloningShot Aug 18
41The evening shutdownCloningShot Aug 18
42All or nothingCloningShot Aug 18
43Not flexible enoughCloningShot Aug 18
44The sleep aid stackCloningShot Aug 18
45Cold stretchingCloningShot Aug 18
46Waiting to feel like itCloningShot Aug 18
47Punishment workoutsCloningShot Aug 18
48The posture gadgetCloningShot Aug 18
49Tight shoulders: strengthen, don't stretchInterviewAug 25
50You don't need to be flexible for yogaInterviewAug 25
51Sweating is not detoxingInterviewAug 25
52Static stretching before a workoutInterviewAug 25
53Pilates is not the easy optionInterviewAug 25
54Soreness is not the scoreboardInterviewAug 25
55Cardio is not the only fat loss toolInterviewAug 25
56One workout vs 9 hours of sittingInterviewAug 25
57Why I teachInterviewAug 25
58What changes in 90 daysInterviewAug 25
59First-week mistakesInterviewAug 25
60The moment that hooked meInterviewAug 25
61To the person on the fenceInterviewAug 25
62Instructor rapid-fireInterviewAug 25
63POV: laptop actually closedPOV ResetAug 25
64POV: first hot pilates with a live DJPOV ResetAug 25
65POV: you booked the 6amPOV ResetAug 25
66POV: the post-class sauna hitPOV ResetAug 25
67POV: rainy Tuesday, candlelit yinPOV ResetAug 25
68POV: you stopped waitingPOV ResetAug 25
69Hot pilates + DJ showcaseHypeAug 25
70Restorative contrast showcaseHypeAug 25
71September offer reel AOfferShot Aug 18
72September offer reel BOfferShot Aug 18
73Bad instruction vs a studio that looks after youCloningShot Aug 18

Locking Aug 12 & 14

Shoot Days & Suggested Running Order

Two days with Jay (Island Rain). Aug 18 ran 10am to 5pm; Aug 25 starts at 10:30am. ECU Photography joins Shoot 1. Aug 18 is the controlled day — the room needs to be ours, no classes. Aug 25 is the community day, built around whichever classes actually run — the running order below shifts once Khamisa confirms the schedule. Everything vertical, 9:16.

Shoot 1 · Controlled Day

Tuesday, Aug 18

10:00am – 5:00pm · quiet studio, no classes

All 20 scripted reels. Cloning shoots in outfit batches: every low-leverage side in the "stressed" look first, then every high-leverage side in the "reset" look, so Khamisa changes twice, not twelve times. Same mark and framing for both takes so the split composites cleanly.

10:00–10:30
Setup. Lighting rig from the P1 plan: two backlights, tube light, reflector. Lock the cloning mark and framing.
10:30–12:30
Cloning, low-leverage sides (37–48). Stressed look. Desk, phone, couch props staged.
12:30–1:00
Break + wardrobe change. Reset props to studio side.
1:00–3:00
Cloning, high-leverage sides (37–48). Reset look. Same framing as the morning takes.
3:00–4:30
Myth-bust block (49–56). Teleprompter, ~10 min per reel. Pilates instructor joins for 53 if available.
4:30–5:00
Offer reels (71–72) if the September offer is decided, otherwise pickup B-roll for the cloning inserts.

Shoot 2 · Community Day

Tuesday, Aug 25

10:00am – 5:00pm · classes running

Interviews, POV resets, class showcases. The exact order depends on the class schedule and instructor availability — interviews slot into the gaps between classes. If a DJ class can land on this day, reels 64 and 69 shoot themselves.

10:00–10:45
Setup + studio beauty B-roll while the room is quiet: candles, mats, props, window light.
10:45–12:30
POV reset B-roll (63–68) with Khamisa + volunteer members: walk-in, mat, sauna, booking screen inserts.
12:30–3:30
Instructor interviews (57–62 source), 15–20 min each, slotted between classes. Lav mic, studio background. Releases signed on the spot.
3:30–5:00
Class showcase capture (69–70) during live classes. 2–3 min continuous per class minimum. Spray bottle for sweat detail on the high-intensity class.
All day
Offer reels (71–72) whenever the light and room allow, if not shot Aug 18.
Gear, both days: the Production 1 Day B lighting plan still applies — the room is dark, shoot high ISO (~12,500), two backlights in the corners, tube light mobile, reflector, spray bottle for sweat shots. Slate every clip with its reel number to camera, same as Production 1 — it made the editor handoff painless. Voice guardrails from the avatar doc: mechanism and numbers over vibes. Never "transformational" or "life-changing," no beginner-splaining. Why this batch matters for the ads: follower ads recycle organic winners, and the retargeting layer is still running recycled conversion creative — the interview footage is its replacement. Protect that block.

Decided on the Aug 14 call

The Remake Slate

All 20 references, with the verdict from call 2 on each one. 16 shooting, 3 maybes, 1 never reviewed. The maybes are all gated on a prop or a warmer reaction, not on the idea. Press E to expand every card, C to collapse.

For Jay: every card links the original. Pull them up on set and match frame by frame where it matters, so the reference can be stitched alongside ours in post.
R1CCTV close call
ShootingJudy · 14.2K
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Security-cam highway near-miss, hard cut to Judy: "want some pancakes?"

Prana version

Dashcam or CCTV near-miss, cut to Khamisa at the studio door: "Whiplash? Time for a stretch."

Decided Aug 14: Straight yes. Needs something blue in frame — a blue mat, blanket or tarp all work, it doesn't have to match exactly.
R2Fall, save the pancake
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Judy wipes out outside the cafe. The pancake plate survives, held high.

Prana version

Khamisa wipes out outside the studio, rolled mat held aloft: "At least my core held."

Decided Aug 14: Straight yes, no changes.
R3At least I know how to land
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Sequel fall bit on the patio: "At least I know how to land."

Prana version

If we shoot it: the point is not the fall, it's the studio as the place that puts you back together after one.

Decided Aug 14: Khamisa called this one lackluster next to the others. If it survives, drop the Judy impression — she introduces herself as herself, and the line lands as “that's going to hurt — come to the studio and we'll get you sorted out.” Not too on the nose.
R4COME FOR BREAKFAST sprint
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Judy sprints down the sidewalk with a plate. Text: "COME FOR BREAKFAST."

Prana version

Khamisa sprints through downtown with a mat, and keeps running all the way in.

Decided Aug 14: Yes, with an add-on agreed on the call: don't stop at the street. Carry the run through the Evolve hallway and into the studio, then land on “come for the workout, stay for the peace” with her settled in the room.
R5Bike pancakes
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Judy rides a bike through the cafe holding pancakes.

Prana version

Ride through the studio corridor, mat strapped on: "CLASS?"

Decided Aug 14: Gated on finding a bike — Khamisa doesn't have a direct line to one. She actually prefers this over R4 if we can pull it off. Fallback agreed: a shopping cart from City Market (she's checking whether they're accessible in the underground), with Neema pushing her in it.
R6Best pancake walk-and-talk
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Deadpan walk: "I HAVE THE BEST PANCAKE." No justification, walks off.

Prana version

Deadpan walk past the Post Building: "I have the best hot pilates class in Vancouver."

Decided Aug 14: Skipped over on the call, never given a yes or no. The deadpan line survives anyway inside ad script M3, so shoot it there if nothing else.
R7We're okay, don't worry
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Stunt bit, the biggest performer in the batch.

Prana version

Someone upside down in the back seat of a car, everyone completely unbothered.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Khamisa is calling in a friend for the back-seat role. Text swaps to the Prana version: “when you're running late to Pilates” / “when nothing affects me anymore.”
R8The slow burn
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Long, pointless, satisfying process shot, then the punchline lands on it.

Prana version

Same structure: someone deep into a slow-burn hobby, then Khamisa cuts in with “you have nothing better to do with your time — come get a workout.”

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Options floated for the slow-burn insert: sand art, carving wood, cutting soap. Cheap to shoot, needs almost no planning — grab whatever we can stage on the day.
R9"Pain Here? STOP Stretching!"
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Rhomboid pain comes from overstretched, weak muscles. Strengthen, don't stretch. 170K likes.

Prana version

Same message, but as an interview: ask the instructor the question, they answer and demonstrate on a student's back.

Decided Aug 14: Yes, and this is what pushed the whole myth-bust block to interview format. Confirmed we're using this specific muscle group — it's the one most people have trouble with.
R10Rhomboid pain (OT version)
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Same thesis, clinical voice, “comment STABILIZE” keyword CTA.

Prana version

"Shoulder blades want to be closer together" — recreated in the studio with Prana vibes.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Use the studio weights in shot so the fix is visibly a Prana class thing, not a generic tip.
R11"An instructor once said to me"
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Instructor-quote community format.

Prana version

Catch students right after class: something an instructor said that stuck with them or got them through.

Decided Aug 14: Yes, but it needs class participation — schedule it right after a class on the 25th. If nobody bites we write the lines, but real answers will be better and shorter. Keep every cut punchy.
R1260 min of stillness = 52 hours a year
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Math reframe: one 60-minute class a week compounds into 52 hours a year.

Prana version

One yin class a week is 52 classes a year. Prana wording over our own photos.

Decided Aug 14: Yes — and it ships as a carousel, not a reel. We already have the photo library for it, so this one needs no shoot time at all.
R13Wake up / TIME FOR BREAKFAST
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Clap-switch transform on a hard cut.

Prana version

“Wake up. It’s time for your workout.” Straight into the studio.

Decided Aug 14: Yes, easy. Shoot plenty of takes and stay loose — this is the one to mess around with on the day.
R14Dumpster transition ad
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Elite transition reveal for the most boring product imaginable.

Prana version

Somersault transition into the studio.

Decided Aug 14: Khamisa's reaction was flat compared to the others, so it's a maybe. If we shoot it, mats down first — nobody is somersaulting onto a hard floor.
R15TRUST WINDOW PROS
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Point-at-camera meme with a confident hook.

Prana version

Trust-fall energy: you can trust our instructors to look after you whatever level you walk in at.

Decided Aug 14: Her strongest yes of the whole session — “that's a definite yes.” Mats down for the fall. The message is instructor reliability regardless of skill level.
R16Realtor "crash course"
Shootingyycnewhomes · 3.0K
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Pun-stitch delivered from the driver's seat.

Prana version

Same setup, Prana punchline.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Shoot in the car, preferably parked outside rather than in the underground so we get daylight.
R17Agency office skit
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"Do you mind when people go to other agencies?" — while dragging a body into a trunk.

Prana version

"Do you mind when your students go to other studios?" Same deadpan, same trunk.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Jay flagged this format is performing well across the board right now. Alt version floated: she's just come out of a CrossFit class and is the body being dragged.
R18Rug store walkthrough
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Deadpan store walkthrough on trending audio. 61K likes.

Prana version

Camera descends from the ceiling into the studio, then walks the room.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. The studio has a ladder — Jay confirmed that's what we need for the drop-in from above. Point of the reel is showing off as much of the room as possible.
R19Open studio showcase
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Store and space showcase walkthroughs.

Prana version

Khamisa opens the door onto an already-set mat with weights laid out, and the room does the rest.

Decided Aug 14: Yes. Pair it with plenty of open-studio B-roll — we have a lot to cut in behind this one.
R20"One of these slides actually gets results"
Shootingadamjcannon1 · realtor
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Original

Realtor draped over a counter, "TO BUY OR SELL?", one smooth transition and a pun on "slides."

Prana version

The sliders pun: Khamisa draped over the reformer, "one of these sliders actually gets results," transition into her actually working the Pilates sliders.

Decided Aug 14: Yes, and Khamisa singled it out unprompted — she called the sliding movement hilarious and wanted it added. Batches with R8 and interview 53 in the same prop setup.

Rewritten after call 2 · teleprompter-ready

Ad Scripts: Morning Membership + 40 Soft

Stale, needs a decision

This block predates the $10 → 12-Week Reset model. M1 and M2 still end on “link in bio” and the Morning Membership is a subscription, which is the exact thing the new funnel stopped advertising. Left untouched on purpose: whether the Morning Membership survives alongside the Reset is Khamisa's call, not an edit. If it stays, these three need the same stage-and-ending treatment as ads 01 to 12.

Two changes out of call 2. The $10 intro offer is retired and replaced by the Morning Membership, so all three intro scripts were rewritten around it. And the 40 Soft prize language was wrong: rewards are not for signing up or simply finishing, they trigger at 35 and 40 days through the studio's loyalty program.

Confirm before any of this publishes

The morning membership price is not settled. Khamisa said $28.88 on the call, which matches the morning early-bird rate already in her value ladder. Neema wrote it down as $26 and the auto-notes recorded $26 too. One of those is wrong.

None of the scripts above say the number out loud, on purpose. Deliver the price as a text overlay and in the caption so it can be corrected in post without a reshoot. Same for the class count — Khamisa thought six or seven morning classes a week but wasn't certain.

Also outstanding: the exact loyalty-program rewards and the criteria that trigger them at 35 and 40 days. Khamisa is confirming. The prize detail from call 1 ($25 credit, two guest passes, $50 gift card draw, straps at 35 days) should be treated as unconfirmed until she comes back.

M1Morning Membership · "Less than breakfast"
Morning
Hook

“Your morning class costs less than going out for breakfast.”

Agitate

“You'll spend thirty dollars on eggs and a coffee and still feel like garbage by ten.”

Transformation

“Or you start in a warm room, move for fifty minutes, and walk into work already awake.”

Proof

“Morning membership. Every morning class, Monday to Friday. Six or seven classes a week.”

CTA

“First fifty people only. Link in bio.”

Khamisa's line, and it beats the old coffee-math version because you genuinely cannot get sit-down breakfast in this city under thirty dollars.
M2Morning Membership · "6:14 a.m."
Morning
Hook

“It's 6:14 in the morning and your shoulders are already up at your ears.”

Agitate

“You haven't opened your laptop yet and the day is already sitting on your chest. You're running the whole list before your feet hit the floor.”

Transformation

“Or you come in, move for fifty minutes, and wipe the slate clean before any of it starts.”

Proof

“Morning classes Monday to Friday, two blocks from your office. Yoga, Pilates, breathwork, mobility.”

CTA

“Morning membership, first fifty people. Link in bio.”

The 6:14pm script flipped to morning, which is where the offer now lives. Khamisa's addition: it's not just a stiff shoulder, it's the anxiety already building about the day ahead. “First-timers only” is gone — anyone can buy this one.
M3Morning Membership · Judy-style deadpan (~15s)
Morning
The bit

Walk-and-talk past the Post Building, dead serious: “I have the best hot pilates class in Vancouver.” Beat. “880 square feet. 28 infrared panels. A playlist that fixes your week.” Beat. “Morning membership just opened. First fifty people.” Walk off. No smile.

Survives the offer change untouched, just swap the last line. This is also where R6's deadpan walk gets used, since R6 itself never got a verdict.
S140 Soft A · "Zero punishment"
Challenge
Hook

“Vancouver, we're running a 40-day challenge with zero punishment in it.”

Agitate

“Most challenges are built to break you. Two workouts a day, ice baths, guilt when you miss a morning. You quit by week two feeling worse than when you started.”

Transformation

“The Soft Challenge is the opposite. Show up. Move. Breathe. September 15 to October 25.”

What signing up means

“Come as often or as little as you want. Signing up is just one promise to yourself: show up a bit more than you have been.”

Proof

“Get to 35 days and the rewards start. Get to all 40 and you've earned the top tier.”

CTA

“Tap below to book your first class.”

Rewritten after Khamisa flagged the old version as misleading. Anyone can join and come as little as they like — but rewards only trigger at 35 and 40 days, through the studio's existing loyalty program.
S240 Soft B · "75 Hard broke you"
Challenge
Hook

“75 Hard broke you. Try 40 Soft.”

Agitate

“Two workouts a day, a gallon of water, a progress photo of your abs. You lasted eleven days and then came the guilt spiral.”

Transformation

“40 Soft is 40 days of showing up gently. Yoga, Pilates, breathwork, whatever your body asks for that day.”

Proof

“One class a week is 52 hours a year of looking after yourself. Now imagine 40 days in a row. Hit 35 and the rewards kick in. Hit 40 and you've done the whole thing.”

CTA

“We start September 15. DM the word SOFT.”

Khamisa specifically loved the 52-hours maths, so it stays — but she noted it's not always rest, sometimes it's a workout. The 35-day tier is now inside the proof beat instead of a vague “finish and you get.”
S340 Soft C · "September reset"
Challenge
Hook

“Summer scattered you. September is for coming back to yourself.”

Agitate

“Patios, trips, late nights. All fun. But your routine is gone and your lower back knows it.”

Transformation

“The 40 Soft rebuilds the habit for you. September 15 to October 25. One decision now, then you just show up.”

Proof

“Show up 35 days and the rewards start. All 40 and you've earned the lot. Plus 40 days of actually feeling like yourself.”

CTA

“DM us the word SOFT to grab a spot.”

Her favourite of the three on the call. Only change needed was the 35-day tier.
S440 Soft ugly ads ×3 (B-roll + text)
Challenge
Ugly 1

Candlelit restorative footage. Text: “POV: you joined a challenge with no ice baths in it.” End card: “40 Soft. Sep 15.”

Ugly 2

Group flow, beat-matched. Text: “40 days. No punishment. Just show up.” End card: “DM SOFT.”

Ugly 3

Studio walk-in. Text: “The challenge for people who hate challenges.” End card: “Starts Sep 15. DM SOFT.”

Approved as-is. All three cut from footage we already own, so they cost nothing on shoot day.
S540 Soft static image ad
Challenge
Image

Khamisa, warm studio light, facing camera, relaxed. Big text: “40 days. Zero punishment.” Small text: “The Soft Challenge starts Sep 15.”

Caption

“Every challenge you quit was built to break you. This one is built to keep you. 40 days of showing up gently: yoga, Pilates, breathwork, whatever your body asks for. Come as often or as little as you want. Get to 35 days and the rewards start; get to 40 and you've earned the lot. Starts September 15. DM us SOFT and we'll send the details.”

Static or carousel, with the work happening in the caption.

12 Reels · Aug 18

Cloning: Low Leverage vs High Leverage

Split-screen, Khamisa plays both versions of herself. Straight back and forth: low leverage speaks, high leverage answers the same moment with the better choice, three times, building to the payoff. Every line below is written to be said out loud — shoot it as written, keep the pace fast, and cut the pauses between turns.

How to shoot these: record all six low-leverage lines first in the stressed look, then all six high-leverage lines in the reset look, same mark and same framing both passes so the split composites cleanly. Khamisa changes twice, not twelve times. Low leverage is slumped, rushed, a little flat. High leverage is settled and unhurried, saying it like it's obvious.
37The snooze spiral
Shot Aug 18

1Low"Alarm goes off at 6. I hit snooze and scroll in bed for 25 minutes."

1High"Alarm goes off at 6. Feet on the floor before I've touched my phone."

2Low"By the time I'm up I'm already behind, and my neck is stiff before the day even started."

2High"Ten minutes of mobility. Hips, spine, shoulders. That's the whole thing."

3Low"First coffee doesn't fix it. Neither does the second."

3High"By the time I'm making coffee my shoulders have already dropped."

End card / text overlay: “Same 25 minutes. Completely different day.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Same bed/mat corner both sides — the outfit swap sells the split. Blue phone light vs warm morning light.
38The third coffee
Shot Aug 18

1Low"It's 3pm and I'm crashing, so I go order another americano."

1High"It's 3pm and I'm crashing, so I close the laptop for two minutes."

2Low"Jaw's clenched, heart's racing, and I still can't focus on anything."

2High"In for four. Hold for four. Out for four. That's one round."

3Low"Then I'm wired until midnight wondering why I can't fall asleep."

3High"Two minutes and I'm actually back. Or I take an early lunch, get to a class, and come back recharged."

End card / text overlay: “Caffeine borrows energy. Breath gives it back.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Desk setup on one side, mat on the other. Box breathing was a proven talking-head topic in Production 1 — this is its cloning-format sequel.
39Lunch at the desk
Shot Aug 18

1Low"Lunch is whatever I can eat over my keyboard."

1High"Lunch is the 12:15 class, two blocks from my office."

2Low"I'm hunched, I'm scrolling, and I never actually stop working."

2High"Fifty minutes, quick shower, and I'm back at my desk by 1:15."

3Low"By 2pm I'm foggy and I've still got three hours to go."

3High"By 2pm I'm sharper than I was at 9 in the morning."

From call 2: Times were wrong in the first draft. Lunch class, back at the desk by 1:15, three hours left at 2pm.
End card / text overlay: “You spend the same hour either way.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Show the real walk from an office street — the studio is 2 blocks from downtown desks and that proximity is the pitch.
40The back crack fix
Shot Aug 18

1Low"My back is tight, so I twist until it cracks."

1High"My back is tight, so I open my hips first."

2Low"Feels incredible. For about four minutes."

2High"Five minutes. Hip flexors, then spine, then glutes."

3Low"Then I'm doing it again an hour later, and again after that."

3High"I don't need to crack it again, because I learned why it was tight in the mobility class."

End card / text overlay: “The crack is relief. Strength is the fix.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Side angle so the spine reads on camera. The routine itself is 3 quick poses — saveable.
41The evening shutdown
Shot Aug 18

1Low"It's 6pm. The laptop is closed but my brain is not."

1High"It's 6pm. The laptop is closed and I'm walking to the 6:15."

2Low"So I order in and scroll on the couch to unwind."

2High"Fifty minutes in a warm room where nobody needs anything from me."

3Low"It's midnight and I'm still wired. Nothing actually unwound."

3High"Home by 8. In bed by 10. Actually asleep."

End card / text overlay: “Numbing out is not the same as winding down.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Warm studio light vs blue phone light carries the contrast. Echoes the winning ad copy ("the relaxing you have planned is takeout and a screen").
42All or nothing
Shot Aug 18

1Low"New month, new me. Six workouts in the first week."

1High"Three classes a week. That's it. That's the entire plan."

2Low"Week two I'm sore, so I skip one. Week three I stop opening the app."

2High"Some weeks I make all three. Some weeks I make two. I keep going."

3Low"By week four I'm back where I started, except now I feel guilty about it."

3High"It's month six and I still haven't stopped."

From call 2: Tie the payoff to 40 Soft — this is the exact consistency problem it exists to solve.
End card / text overlay: “Consistency beats intensity. Every single time.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Calendar overlay: crossed-out streak vs steady checkmarks. Consistency over intensity is the studio's actual retention story.
43Not flexible enough
Shot Aug 18

1Low"I watched a class video and thought, there's no way I can do that."

1High"I watched the same video and booked the class anyway."

2Low"So I decided I'd start once I got more flexible."

2High"I couldn't touch my toes. The instructor handed me a block."

3Low"That was two years ago. Still waiting to be flexible enough."

3High"That was eight weeks ago. Now I can touch my toes."

End card / text overlay: “Flexibility is the result. Not the requirement.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Real modified poses on the high-leverage side. Pairs with myth-bust 50 — same objection, two formats.
44The sleep aid stack
Shot Aug 18

1Low"I can't sleep, so I take melatonin and get into bed with my phone."

1High"I can't sleep, so I book the 8pm class instead of scrolling."

2Low"Blue light, doom scroll, just one more episode."

2High"Long exhale, twice as long as the inhale. Five minutes."

3Low"It's 1am, I'm wide awake, and I'm annoyed about being wide awake."

3High"Class, shower, bed. I'm out by 11. No pill."

From call 2: Ties to reel 41 (evening shutdown). Both live in the evening, both point at the 8pm class.
End card / text overlay: “Your nervous system doesn't need a supplement. It needs a signal.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Dim candlelit framing on the reset side. Breathwork is a class category — soft product placement, no pitch.
45Cold stretching
Shot Aug 18

1Low"My hamstrings are tight, so I yank on them at my desk."

1High"My hamstrings are tight, so I get into the heated room first."

2Low"Cold muscle, no warmup, so my body braces harder and I end up tighter than I started."

2High"Twenty eight infrared panels. Tissue warms, blood moves, range opens."

3Low"Nothing changes. Tomorrow they're just as tight."

3High"Same stretch. This time my body actually lets go."

End card / text overlay: “Heat isn't a luxury. It's the mechanism.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Heat panel visible in frame. Name the mechanism on the overlay — tissue temperature, blood flow, range. The 28 infrared panels are a real differentiator.
46Waiting to feel like it
Shot Aug 18

1Low"I'll go to class when I feel like going to class."

1High"I booked Tuesday and Thursday on Sunday night."

2Low"Monday I'm tired. Wednesday I'm busy. Friday I'm out with people."

2High"Tuesday comes around. I don't feel like it. I go anyway, because it's already booked."

3Low"I haven't felt like it in four months."

3High"I have never once walked out regretting it."

End card / text overlay: “Motivation shows up after. Not before.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
Phone screen insert: the booking confirmation. Overlaps with her top organic POV post ("stopped waiting for the right time") — proven angle.
47Punishment workouts
Shot Aug 18

1Low"I ate badly all weekend, so today I'm punishing myself for it."

1High"I ate badly all weekend, so today I'm moving because it feels good."

2Low"Burpees until I want to be sick. That's what I deserve."

2High"Burn class Monday. Restorative Wednesday. Both of them count."

3Low"I dread every single workout, and then I quit for a month."

3High"It's month three and I still like going."

From call 2: Callback to 40 Soft. The theme is longevity and care, never punishment or consequence.
End card / text overlay: “You cannot punish yourself into consistency.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
High energy vs slow control, same person. Showcases the class range (burn / sculpt / yin) without listing it.
48The posture gadget
Shot Aug 18

1Low"My posture is terrible, so I bought a posture corrector online."

1High"My posture is terrible, so I started strengthening what holds me up."

2Low"Wore it twice. It's in a drawer somewhere."

2High"Ten minutes a day. Upper back, rear delts, deep core."

3Low"So I bought a standing desk instead. Now I slouch standing up."

3High"Nothing is holding me up except me. That's the whole point."

End card / text overlay: “A brace does the work for you. That's the problem.”
Target ~25s. Three exchanges, cut tight, no pauses between turns.
The gadget-in-a-drawer shot is the joke. Pairs with myth-bust 49 (strengthen over stretch).
73Bad instruction vs a studio that looks after you · new
Shot Aug 18

1Bad studio"Don't use a prop. Just try your best."

1Prana"What's your level? Here, take a block. It'll actually let you get into it."

2Bad studio"You've done breathwork before, right? Everyone has."

2Prana"First time? Perfect. I'll cue you the whole way through."

3Bad studio"You pulled something? You probably went in cold. Not much I can do."

3Prana"Let's modify it. Focus here instead, and stay off that side today."

End card / text overlay: “A class should meet you where you are.”
Target ~25s. Same back-and-forth cut as the other cloning reels.
New from call 2. Khamisa's idea, off the back of the Apex cloning reel that took off because the actor leaned all the way into the bad character. She hears horror stories about other studios constantly — no modifications, no props, no questions asked. Lean hard into the bad instructor; that's where this one lives or dies.

8 Reels · Aug 18 · format changed

Myth-Busts, now as Instructor Interviews

These were talking heads. As of call 2 they're interviews: someone asks the question off camera, an instructor answers and demonstrates. It's more credible coming from the person who teaches the class, and it introduces the instructors and the classes at the same time. Lead with the pain, land on what happens in class as the answer.

Khamisa is lining up instructors — Maya and Ally both teach strength and stretch and use weights for exactly these areas, so they're the natural fit for 49 and 52. Don't over-rehearse: the good version is her asking a real question and them answering it like they would on the floor. Extra questions will surface on the day; capture them.
49Tight shoulders need strength, not more stretching
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Maya or Ally (strength & stretch)

The question (asked off camera)

“I keep doing deep stretch classes and my shoulders still aren't getting any better. Why?”

The answer / demo

Tension comes from weak, overworked muscles, not short ones. Stretching something already overstretched won't fix it. Strength supports it. Demo on a student's back with the studio weights.

The anchor of the block, and the reel that pushed the whole section to interview format. Lead with the pain, land on the weights in class as the answer.
50You don't need to be flexible to start
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“Do I need to be flexible before I come to a class?”

The answer / demo

Flexibility is what you leave with, not what you arrive with. Show the modified version beside the full version, and hand over a block on camera.

Khamisa's framing: the point isn't “you don't need to be flexible,” it's that the studio hands you the props so it doesn't matter.
51Sweating is not detoxing
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“Does the hot room sweat the toxins out of me?”

The answer / demo

No. Heat raises tissue temperature, blood flow and range of motion. That's the actual mechanism, and it's a better answer than the myth. 28 infrared panels in shot.

Mechanism over vibes, with the panels doing the visual work.
52Stretching cold makes you tense up
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“Should I stretch before class or after?”

The answer / demo

Dynamic first, static after. Stretching a cold muscle makes it brace harder, which is the opposite of what you're going for.

Khamisa's note: the counterintuitive bit is that cold stretching increases tension. Tie it to how being braced all day follows you around. Pairs with cloning reel 45.
53Pilates is not the easy option
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Pilates instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“Is Pilates the rest-day class?”

The answer / demo

Slow control under load. Sliders, ankle weights, the shake at minute four. Precision is the difficulty.

Shoots in the same prop setup as R8 and R20.
54Soreness is not the scoreboard
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“If I'm not sore afterwards, did it even count?”

The answer / demo

Adaptation happens without pain. The markers that matter are range, control and consistency.

Keep it under 35 seconds. Highly saveable.
55Cardio is not the only tool
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“Do I have to do cardio to change my body?”

The answer / demo

Muscle, recovery and consistency drive it. Burn, sculpt and rest are one system, not a shortcut.

Cut class B-roll from the 25th behind the answer.
56One workout doesn't undo nine hours of sitting
Shot Aug 18
Who answers

Any instructor

The question (asked off camera)

“I train at 6am. Isn't that enough?”

The answer / demo

Movement through the day beats one heroic hour. Give three desk resets, sixty seconds each, on camera.

The most saveable reel in the block. Soft class mention at the end, nothing hard.

6 Clips · Aug 25 · also feeds the retargeting ads

Instructor Interviews

Unscripted, 15–20 minutes per instructor, slotted between classes. Handheld or tripod, studio background, lav mic. Target 3–4 instructors — include Proshat if she's available. Releases signed on the day. Each interview yields 1–2 reels plus the trust-layer ad cuts the retargeting campaign has been waiting on since launch.

Ask every instructor

The Question Set

Q1
What were you doing before you taught here, and what pulled you in?
Q2
What actually changes for people after 2–3 months of consistent classes?
Q3
What do you see new students get wrong in their first week?
Q4
Walk me through your favourite moment in a class you taught here.
Q5
What would you say to someone on the fence about their first class?

Planned cuts

The 6 Reels

57
Why I teach. Best origin-story moment from any instructor.
58
What changes in 90 days. The most concrete before/after description, no hype.
59
First-week mistakes. Practical, saveable, instructor authority.
60
The moment that hooked me. Emotional peak, paired with class B-roll.
61
To the person on the fence. Direct to camera, natural CTA energy.
62
Instructor rapid-fire. The best short answers from every interview cut into one.

6 Reels · Aug 25

POV Resets

Her single best-performing organic post is a POV reset — this continues the proven format. Silent B-roll, the text overlay carries the POV line, licensed ambient audio in post.

63POV: it's 6:04pm and the laptop is actually closed
Aug 25
Visuals

Walk-in from Homer St, lights shift warm, mat unrolls. The Reset Journey structure from Production 1, tighter cut this time.

64POV: your first hot pilates class with a live DJ
Aug 25
Visuals

DJ booth, heat haze, group hitting the beat. Shoot during the Aug 25 DJ class if one lands on the schedule.

65POV: you booked the 6am and you feel human by 7
Aug 25
Visuals

Sunrise window light, quiet room, coffee after. Early-risers audience, ties to the morning membership tier.

66POV: the post-class sauna hit
Aug 25
Visuals

Sauna door, steam, the exhale. Gym access + sauna is a real differentiator — use it.

67POV: rainy Tuesday, candlelit yin
Aug 25
Visuals

Rain on the window, candles, slow holds. Vancouver fall is coming — this is the seasonal winner of the six.

68POV: you stopped waiting for the right time
Aug 25
Visuals

Booking screen, shoes at the door, first breath on the mat. Mirrors the structure of her top organic post.

4 Reels · Aug 25

Showcases & Offer Reels

Two class showcases to refresh the follower-ad pool, and two offer reels that are blocked until the September offer is decided — that decision is on the Aug 12/14 call agenda.

69Hot pilates + DJ showcase
Aug 25
Direction

Beat-matched, dark, high energy. Wide room shot, close-up sliders and sweat, DJ cueing moments. Capture 2–3 minutes continuous per class minimum for edit flexibility.

70Restorative contrast showcase
Aug 25
Direction

Candlelit, slow, ambient — the calm counterpart so the page shows both energies. Close-ups: flame, hands, breath.

71September offer reel A (talking head)
Blocked
Blocked on the offer decision. The $38.88 anniversary offer expires end of August — whatever replaces it is what this reel sells. Decide on the Aug 12/14 calls, script before the 18th if possible.
72September offer reel B (text over hype)
Blocked
Same dependency as 71. Offer line over the best showcase footage from Aug 25 — no extra shoot time needed once the offer exists.

Before any of this runs as paid · audited against the P+P funnel

What Is Missing To Actually Run This

The twelve ads are creative. Creative is maybe a third of a working funnel. Audited against the TOF / MOF / BOF Vortex spine, worst first. Note the shape: only the $10 is ever sold online. The Reset is a human sale at the desk and the membership rolls on its own, so there is one checkout to get right, not three.

4
Hard blockers, campaign cannot run
0
MOF ads written, of the 10+ the spine wants
7
BOF ads, of the 30+ the spine wants stacked
01

The $10 checkout still forces account creation before payment

This is the whole ballgame, because the $10 is the only checkout cold traffic ever touches. The $399 is sold by a human at the front desk and the membership rolls automatically, so there is exactly one page in this funnel that can leak, and it leaks badly.

Before any payment screen a first-timer has to create a full Mariana account: name, email, password, phone, birth date, consents, terms, waiver. After already giving name and email on the landing page.

The receipts: the $10 campaign ran Jun 22 to Jul 31 for $1,555, produced 617 landing page views, and converted 5 purchases. That is 0.8% on a ten dollar offer. The ads were never the problem.

Fixing this is worth more than every ad on this page combined. Owner is BrandBot / Mariana support, which means Khamisa has to raise it.

02

The 12-Week Reset has to exist as a product the front desk can ring up

Not a landing page and not a public checkout, because it is never sold cold. What it needs is to exist in Mariana as a purchasable package with the right terms: twelve weeks unlimited, then rolls to $155.52 every four weeks, plus the three-payment option as a separate line the team can select without asking anyone.

The one genuine gap: the follow-up ladder for people who did not buy on the day runs to day 7 and ends with one more direct offer. If somebody says yes by text on day 4, the team needs something to send them. A simple payment link covers it. Fast-follow, not a blocker.

03

There is no lead magnet, so MOF has nothing to give away

MOF is funded at $0 for September, so this is not urgent, but it is the reason the middle of the funnel stays empty. Give away a complete solution to one narrow problem, capture the email, nurture.

The good news is ad 02 already invented it. "We ask you two questions and hand you a week. Which three classes, which days, which instructor." That is the lead magnet, it just has to be built as an actual asset and named properly.

03

Neither landing page has a pixel, so there is no warm pool to retarget

Zero fbq on the $10 page and zero on the $38.88 page. Every retargeting audience the Vortex needs is built from pixel events, so right now BOF has nothing to target and no way to measure a landing-to-checkout dropoff.

The $10 page also has no lead capture. The $38.88 page has the form; the $10 page sends people straight to BrandBot. Porting that form across is what makes a checkout abandon survivable, because the front desk can call a captured lead and cannot call a stranger.

This is now the gate on the whole BOF layer. Nothing else in the funnel depends on it, and it depends on nothing else.

05

The funnel is being built out of order

The spine is explicit: crack TOF, then MOF, then BOF. Running all three from a standing start is the documented way people get stuck. Right now the plan is a cold launch of all three at once.

Practically: ads 01, 03, 04, 05 go live first and prove they move traffic. MOF follows once the lead magnet exists. BOF only makes sense once there are DMers from the last 7 to 14 days to retarget, and today there are none.

06

Volume is nowhere near what the spine assumes

BOF wants 30 or more ads stacked and rotated with a frequency cap so nobody sees the same one twice. We will have seven. MOF wants 10+ angles selling the lead magnet. We have zero.

The seven are the right seven, they are just the start of a library, not the library.

07

Audiences and caps are not built

BOF targets people who DM'd in the last 7 to 14 days, with a 3 to 7 day frequency cap, on an engagement objective with no CTA button. None of that exists in the account. The current retargeting campaign just reuses the conversion creative against a generic audience.

08

Tracking has two known holes

Megafon's own landing page has no pixel and no GA4, so the retargeting pool misses anyone who landed and did not reach checkout, and there is no view of landing-to-checkout dropoff.

There is still no purchase webhook from BrandBot, so pipeline stages get moved by hand and nobody has confirmed who watches it daily.

09

Two prices and the reward tiers are still unconfirmed

The $10 first class, the $399 Reset, and what triggers at 35 and 40 days on 40 Soft. Shooting is unblocked because no script says a number, but nothing publishes until all three land.

The order I would actually do this in

1. Fix the $10 checkout. It is the only one cold traffic touches and nothing else matters until a stranger can pay without building an account.
2. Set the Reset up in Mariana as an in-person package, plus a payment link for day-4 yeses.
3. Pixel on both pages, plus the lead form on the $10 page.
4. Rebuild TOF from fresh uploads (the mimikhi block kills any duplicate) and run it at $40/day until there is real traffic.
5. Build "Your First Week" as a real asset, then launch MOF with ad 02 plus new angles.
6. Turn on BOF at $15/day against page visitors, 75% video viewers and IG engagers, and start stacking toward 30 ads.

Steps 1 to 3 are not creative work and none of them happen on a shoot day. They are the reason this is not close to ready.

Before Aug 18

What We Need Locked

The open items, by owner. Most of these are decisions for the Aug 12 and Aug 14 calls.

K0

Shopping cart — before tomorrow

City Market, whether one can be taken to the underground. This is the fallback for R5 if no bike turns up.

K0

Bike — before tomorrow

R5 is gated on it, and she'd rather have R5 than R4.

K0

Friend for the car shot — before tomorrow

R7 needs someone upside down in the back seat.

K0

Instructors on the floor tomorrow

Maya and Ally for interviews 49 and 52, plus a Pilates instructor for 53. The whole myth-bust block depends on this.

K0

Ladder

Confirmed at the studio — needed for the R18 ceiling drop.

M0

Neema: confirm the morning membership price

$28.88 or $26, plus the real class count. Do not shoot the number spoken until this is settled.

K1

Loyalty program rewards + criteria

What exactly triggers at 35 and 40 days. All 40 Soft ad copy is blocked on this.

K1

Morning membership landing page

Plus the offer doc, so the ad CTAs can be finished.

K1

Instructors for Aug 25 interviews

3–4 confirmed (Proshat?), release forms ready.

K2

Class schedules for both days

Aug 18 needs the room quiet all day. Aug 25: which classes run, and can a DJ class land on it?

K3

Wardrobe

Two distinct looks for the cloning reels (stressed vs reset), one consistent look for the myth-bust block.

K4

Members on camera

Volunteers for POV resets and class footage on the 25th, releases signed.

K5

Props staged

Sliders, bands, ankle weights, bolsters, candles — clean and ready both days.

K6

The September offer

The $38.88 anniversary dies end of August. Reels 71–72 and the conversion campaign both need its replacement decided.

K7

Her saved Explore examples

Still open from Jul 29. Bring to the call, react live, and this list adjusts on the spot.

M1

Megafon: shoot doc

Full teleprompter scripts for reels 37–56 once concepts are approved on the Aug 14 call.

M2

Megafon: lighting + slating

P1 lighting rig packed; every clip slated with its reel number for the editor.